At a certain point in our writing careers, we all ask, "What makes truly great writers great?"

We ask that question, because deep down inside, we realize that we are missing the "something special" that makes some authors famous, while we struggle to find our writing voices.

We endeavor to create stories that will get our books noticed in the marketplace and deliver to us the commercial success we strongly desire.

We wrestle with how to put together the words on a page to leave our readers breathless with anticipation as to what will come next.

The all-important question of "what we are missing," often leads to a conflict in our own minds...

It causes us to question our own abilities - to question whether we should keep trying to create good art or whether we should quit trying to write a book and focus on our day jobs instead.

It propels us into a world of self-loathing and self-doubt.

It leads us to deny those things we do well, and it steals our ambition and motivation to keep moving forward.

It robs us of our confidence as authors, and it makes us question every word we put to the page.

Fortunately, it doesn't have to be this way for you...

Sometimes it seems like other authors just come out of nowhere, and they start creating successful books without the struggle we often feel ourselves...

However, it is an illusion that a "lucky few" people were born with writing talent.

What we never see is the half-written stories, poorly-written stories, the drafts chunked in the trash can, or the first dozen drafts of the story we fell in love with when we finally read it.

As storytellers, we have all had to learn our trade, practice, improve our skills, learn some more, rinse and repeat, then just keep going until we started seeing the success we wanted to achieve.

Success never comes easily, but it always comes to those of us who dedicate ourselves to our goals.

My name is Bill Platt. Britt Malka and I understand the challenges many authors face when they sit down to write.

We both failed early and failed often, while we worked very hard to learn how become better writers and how to produce the kinds of books people would be happy to purchase.

We learned. We practiced. We failed. We learned some more. We kept trying to get better and to find our place in the world of literature.

Eventually, we learned how to make our living as writers - as book authors.

We have several decades of writing experience, between us, and for most of the last decade, we have been teaching other book authors how to do what we do.

Between Britt and I, we have produced dozens of training guides for book authors, while continuing to publish our own books on the Amazon platform.

People who buy and read fiction books want to:

• Be entertained;
• Meet characters they can fall in love with;
• Recognize characters very similar to themselves and their friends;
• See people who face extraordinary challenges in their lives;
• Experience the same fears that story characters experience;
• Feel the same sorrows the characters feel;
• Share the same joys and feelings of jubilation felt by your characters;;
• Be surprised when things don't work out as expected;
• Desire the same outcomes that characters desire;
• Be able to identify the real friends and foes of the main characters;
• Work out how a character will overcome specific challenges;
• See if the solution produces the anticipated results;
• Feel the same sense of accomplishment that the people in the story feel;
• Enjoy the rewards the main characters receive, as if they received the rewards themselves.

It is all about the emotional journey your readers can take with the characters in your story.

Readers want to EXPERIENCE YOUR BOOK, as if they are standing right next to the characters in your story.

People want to feel the same emotions the characters in your book feel, as if they were watching their best friend in the world go through the events defined in your fiction books.

They want to be able to recognize how a person is feeling, without having to ask that person how they are feeling.

My ex-wife has people who she has been friends with for thirty years.

She seems to know intuitively how those people are feeling and what might be going on in their lives to cause them to feel the way they do.

Her intuition lets her know how people are feeling - just from a word, the tone of voice, or a simple gesture.

^^^ THIS is how readers want to be able to see the characters in your fiction stories.

People don't want to be TOLD what your characters are thinking and feeling...

People want to be SHOWN what the characters are feeling and thinking during the course of the journey laid out in the pages of your books.

Delivered inside of a 39-page PDF,
"The Hemingway Approach" will teach you
how to write emotionally-powerful stories
that will SHOW readers what is happening.

There Are NO REFUNDS On This Offer.

Hemingway was awarded the Pulitzer Prize for Fiction (1953) and the Nobel Prize in Literature (1954), one quarter century after he began publishing books.

Six decades later, we continue to see Hemingway's influence in some of the more popular stories being told in the modern age.

Inside of the pages of this fiction writing guide, we detail one of Brad Pitt's most memorable roles to demonstrate one of Hemingway's three keys to writing mind-blowing scenes in fiction stories.

We demonstrate and explain:

• The 3 Keys to writing powerful fiction stories - keys which are very easy-to-remember;
• Common mistakes to avoid when telling your stories;
• Exactly how to implement "Show, Don't Tell" in your storytelling;
• How to SHOW your readers what is going on inside your stories;
• Different exercises you can do to enhance your observational skills;
• How to apply your real-world observations to the characters in your stories;
• What to do to make sure all of your characters are not carbon-copy replicas of each other;
• The 6 Emotional Tools you can use to make your fiction stories more memorable in the eyes of readers;
• How to write with emotion;
• How to ramp up the emotional impact of your stories;
• How to describe what your characters are thinking and feeling within the scope of a particular scene;
• With many examples of how to implement the concepts in this training;
• And much more...

When you start writing the kinds of books people love to read, you will find the work becomes much easier...

It makes the job of writing the book easier...

It makes the job of finding an audience much simpler...

It helps you to grow as a writer...

It helps you to achieve other goals that you have not yet dared to dream...

The beauty of it is:

• As people start leaving reviews on your books, more people will want to buy your books.
• As more people start buying your books, Amazon will promote your books to more of their customers.
• As more people starting buying books, more people will be clamoring for you to write more books, so they can give you more money.
• You will find a lot more incentive and desire to sit down to write more books, so you can make more money.
• You will be able to let go of the stress of not knowing whether you are wasting your time or not.
• As your income grows, you will find that paying the bills is a lot easier.
• You will be able to spend more of your income on the finer things in life, like college for the kids or more vacation time with your spouse.
• You will be able to pay off your debts more quickly, and focus less of your attention on scraping together pennies to pay your bills.
• You will be able to grow your income to the point that you won't have to worry if retirement income will allow you to maintain your current lifestyle.
• You will have more time to spend with friends and family.
• You will feel a lot better about your life and your accomplishments.
• You will find that you have the financial ability to do all of those things you wanted to do, but could never afford to do previously.

You simply need to put one foot in front of the other and make a decision to learn how to become a better storyteller.

You need to set aside time to learn, and you need to set aside time to practice.

Then, you need to put into your stories the new skills that you have learned...

It is decision time...

Decide now to make this investment in yourself, so that you can learn the skills you need to take you to the next level in your writing career.

Q1: Are there any up-sells?

A1: There are three optional up-sells offered.

1. "Show, Don't Tell - Sometimes" ($19.95 offered as a one-click up-sell on the purchase page for the main offer) - Inside this 21-page PDF, Britt Malka details how to effectively use facial expressions & body language to "Show, Don't Tell" and to demonstrate a wide-range of emotions. She also provides plenty of examples of how to show and when you should tell instead of show.
   {Originally Published: 2016. Regular Price: $27}
2. "Inspired Fiction: How To Use Pre-Written Fiction Plots to Inspire Great Storytelling" ($19.95) - This 37-page PDF instructs you how to use pre-written fiction plots in a way that will explode your creativity and make you a better storyteller.
   {Originally Published: 2014. Regular Price: $27}
3. "Writing Romance Fiction for Women & for Men" ($19.95) - Women make up the bulk of the audience for romance-fiction stories, but a number of men also enjoy reading the genre. It is important to understand the distinctions of "what women want" and "what men want" in romance stories. This 33-page PDF will walk you through the intricacies of writing romance for the appropriate audiences.
   {Originally Published: 2014. Regular Price: $27}

Due to the nature of this product, there will be NO REFUNDS.

Read this page again if you need to do so.

Be confident in the decision you are getting ready to make.

Then make your purchase.

Once you have read the training, implement what you have learned.

Start writing the books we both know you are capable of producing.

As stated previously,
this training is delivered
inside one 39-page PDF.

There Are NO REFUNDS On This Offer.

P.S. If you have any questions about this offer, drop Bill Platt a note
at “support ~at~ thephantomwriters.com”. He will be happy to answer
your questions.

Bill Platt

Britt Malka

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